RP story with Alana and Luigi pg 8

Elpona: * grins evilly* Well it Shure have been a long time since I had the fun to come out and play * swings tail at a bolder and breaks it in half*
Luigi: -Hides behind a rock and watches-
A deer runs by
Elpona: * attacks it and kills is. Tears at the flesh and eats it*
Luigi: -Gasps silently and cowers-
Elpona: * finishes her meal as blood covers her fur and it drips from her mouth.* hhmmm * looks up and sniffs the air and can sense someone near* I can smell you both, you have to not worry for you are not of my taste * smiles evilly and sends an evil glare towards the cave*
Luigi: Eep! -Cowers-
Elpona: * seeing Luigi's reaction she sends an evil laugh through the night sky*
Luigi: -Shivers and thinks: How can people be scared of me when I'm more scared of them?-
Elpona: * jumps behind a bush and a pig's screech can be herd. Drags it out from the bush and tears the head off
Luigi: -Crawls out, cowering-
Elpona: heh so you show yourself * blood pours out of her mouth as she smiles*
Luigi: -Growls at the sight of her and his eyes glow red-
Elpona: *stands up and faces Luigi and gives him an evil smile* haha what's wrong little runt did I take your friend from you
Luigi: -Tackles her and rips up some of her skin by instinct-
Elpona: *growls at him and makes a gash in his side with her claws. Growls at him again and troughs him into a bolder* how dare you
Luigi: -Gets up, blood dripping from his mouth- I... -Collapses- *Groan* -Tries to get up again-
Elpona: how dare you attacks me you weakling. You can't even get yourself up from that blow. * dashes towards Luigi and picks him up by the neck* you are a worthless pile of crap you know that
Luigi: -Kicks her in the stomach really hard-
Elpona: *screams and drops Luigi and she grabs her stomach*